3.29.2009

magazine feature 2 update





changed some things in my feature 2. the opener for this has been such a struggle, but i went back to the first idea and just elaborated and chose different typefaces. also, added more body copy to give myself more text to work with.

1 comment:

............................ said...

coming along.

headline typography on bonefide needs work.

while you clearly worked on it, it still obliterates the image.

you want that?

if so, tighten up the typography.

if not, fix.

love.