I added an image of people working to help convey "money=slavery," but I don't really know how much it helps. I'm kind of stuck. I know the poster is still vague, but I don't really know what else to do to help communicate my message without adding more text.
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okay.
step back a few.
what do you mean by slavery?
tell me the steps that lead you to say money = slavery.
go slowly.
include all your thot processes, however minor they may seem to you.
i know this idea didn't just pop into your head.
there's a long line of thinking that allowed you to arrive at this statement.
but, since you skipped all the steps in your thinking and just showed us the final, we don't know where you're coming from.
alone, i can think of many different things this can mean.
but, what i think is not important.
need to know what you're thinking.
spell it all out slowly, step by step.
from there we'll go on to the poster.
g.
again.
research, research, research.
you took on a big topic.
needs to be well researched in order to make sense.
book referral from an insider:
Must read is Secrets of the Temple.
that's exactly how he said it.
works for one of the largest financial consulting firms in the industry.
take his advice.
and mine.
spend loads of time researching so that you can speak intelligently on the topic and so that your graphics represent the complexity of your topic.
read, read, read.
g.
I think the slavery part is unclear to me. Maybe illustrate more on slavery. I can't really see the people or what they're doing.
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